Monday 20 May 2013

Writing a story

Last summer, I traveled to Tilcara for a short holidays, and it was something I'll never forget. First of all I was very excited because I'd never visited that place yet, and I had to travel alone because some friends were there when I decided to go.

With my new best friends! :)
It was a sunny Sunday when I bought a ticket for my unforgettable vacations. The number was 45. Yes! The last ticket! And for that I knew it was a very good signal. I've been lucky. Into the bus, I met my "new best friends", Jime, Ema and Cristian, with whom I spent an enjoyable time in Tilcara. But my plan was meet my others friends there, because they had a place to stay, a tent, some food and others things that I didn't take and I needed.

When I arrived Tilcara, I noticed with surprise that my friends were not my friends. They gave me a different adresses of them, and I phoned them a lot of times but I didn't have answers. I was so sad because they dissapointed me, and I didn't know what I had to do. Fortunately, my new best friends were very kind with me, and I stay with them, in their tent, with their food and their stuffs. It was very funny, because I never imagine that it was happen with me. Anyway, my short holidays were better than I'd planned, and I want to comeback there next year!

1 comment:

  1. WELL DONE! B-
    THE STORY SHOULD START THIS WAY "IT WAS A TRIP I'LL NEVER FORGET"
    for a short holiday(s)
    I'd never visited that place (yet)BEFORE
    When I arrived TO Tilcara
    They gave me a different adDress (of them)
    I never imagine that it was happen with me?? I HAD NEVER IMAGINE THAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN TO ME
    I want to comeback (GO BACK)there next year!

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